even though the 3-point perspective shots are overused, I like how you’ve managed to convey both depth and flatness in this photo. the lines remind me of those on basketball courts and the cars remind me of miniature toy cars, forgotten and left behind. the composition is good, although I think it wouldn’t hurt to play around with the contrast a little more in photoshop.
no offence, but could I be so bold as to give you some suggestions on the grammar? I would personally replace the first sentence of the second paragraph with “an image is dead if no one can recall what it looks like” and the last two lines with “I like distorted memories / and images”.
is this Kai Tak airport?
even though the 3-point perspective shots are overused, I like how you’ve managed to convey both depth and flatness in this photo. the lines remind me of those on basketball courts and the cars remind me of miniature toy cars, forgotten and left behind. the composition is good, although I think it wouldn’t hurt to play around with the contrast a little more in photoshop.
no offence, but could I be so bold as to give you some suggestions on the grammar? I would personally replace the first sentence of the second paragraph with “an image is dead if no one can recall what it looks like” and the last two lines with “I like distorted memories / and images”.
good luck with your photo blog!
Yes, you are right about the grammar. I was too tired when writing.
Thanks!